Monday, March 25, 2013
Encouragement !!
Hi Guys,
Keep going! Keep it up!
there are some awesome ideas and drafts for fanfics here and I can't wait to read them after the final posting.
Also, remember to comment and critique the fanfics of other group members as well - you could do that next week (week 5) after everyone has posted their final work
Pranay's Fan Fic - Elementary - Final
He stood there glistening in the sun upon his roof top at the brownstone, refreshing UV light hitting every inch of his body as he absorbed the positive benefits of the first mornings light.
"Sherlock!!" Joan was hurtling up the stairs bumping into things as she flung open the door.
"What are you doing?! Why haven’t you got your clothes on?!"
Joan blushed as Sherlock swung around in full view.
"Can’t you surmise the obvious by your self Watson?! I am attempting to put on that glow you were hoping for on our wedding day. My present to you my dear Watson!"
Sherlock exclaimed with his matter of factly face giving way to a slight signer on the corner of his left lip as the joy of putting Joan on edge shone through his bright grey eyes.
"For god’s sake Sherlock!" Even in her anger she could not hide her feelings nor her joyful disposition.
Moments later everything was on the move and back on track, Sherlock had managed to be bathed, clothed and ready to meet up with Captain Gregson for their journey to the chapel as Joan was waited on hand and foot by her brides maids preparing for the grandest of all occasions.
Sherlock Holmes and Joan Watson’s wedding, even the gods them selves felt relief.
Gregson's Grin was certainly something to witness as he opened his door to see Sherlock standing before him.
"Sherlock! You look amazing!" "Okay Gregson, have your fun if you will. Take advantage of my moment of weakness."
"Come now Holmes! It's not often I am in this most fortuitous position, dressed to the nines and looking at Sherlock Holmes in a tux!"
Agent Bell popped his head around the corner grinning like the cheshire cat.
“I still have these you dirty detective!” He dangled on his finger evidence from the bachelor party, a pair of pink lace panties with a strange hole on one end.
“You do still value your life don’t you Marcus?”
“Are you seriously going to threaten a police officer?!” Bell remarked unable to wipe the grin from his face.
“Apologies agent Bell, maybe we should then infer to the numerous skeletons you have in your closet that I am privy to, like that time at Hotel Delaminate?”
Bell’s grin swiftly turned into a look of terror.
“Gregson he never plays fair, sometimes I just want to shoot him and be done with it.”
All three broke out in to hysterics and banter went on about the amusing details of the night prior.
On the outskirts of the city approached a dark as night Lamborghini, roaring past the Welcome to New York sign. Inside sat a man tall, well built and present to his task.
I am along way from home, he thought. If she is here I’ll find her. He fought his internal demons about how to handle her when he did, his foot dove into the gas pedal that much deeper as the car ripped into New York City.
Mean while Joan was on the way to the Chapel with her brides maids.
Mrs. Watson gave her daughter a loving look.
“Joanne, I never thought I would get to see you in your wedding dress looking so lovely!”
“Geez thanks Mum!” The anger and slight shame rose up inside of her. No surprise coming from a hardened Chinese woman like her.
“I didn’t mean it like that dear! Its just that you have had such a bad track record with men and then after you became an investigator seeing all those horrible things I thought that would ruin you for sure.”
“Well I am not ruin mum!”
Mrs. Watson didn’t even flinch.
“Well that’s all over with now anyway, my darling girl is getting married to a genius and famous detective and she is the most beautiful and happy I have ever seen her.”
She gave that well placed mothers smile that every child works hard for, Joan even in her disbelief smiled.
They pulled up to the entrance of the chapel surrounded by vehicles everywhere as the press from several news agencies flashed their cameras.
The girls all smiled, they were about to receive the moment of fame and a whole lot more.
Once inside Joan was worrying like a pre-med student.
“Where the hell is that man?! I’ll kill him if he’s late!”
Bell, Gregson and Sherlock arrived around the back, Sherlock started feeling unwell.
“You alright Sherlock?” You look like you’re gonna throw up?”
“Can you feel that?” “Yeah its Sherlock Holmes finally scared of something and it’s priceless.” Bell remarked.
“No! Something’s not right, it all feels off.” He started thinking rapidly, he had worked this day and its details down to the bone and something was not right.
As they walked in through the back to prepare for the ceremony Sherlock’s mind worked hard as chills ran down his spine.
A Lamborghini skid to a stop outside St. Paul's Chapel.
The magic moment was happening, Joan in all her beauty began to walk down the aisle as the music played proudly in the background and all the guests got to their feet.
There was an explosion of streaming smoke in front of the Pastor.
Sherlock’s jaw dropped, and for the first time in a long time horror was on his face.
“Irene!”
Joan stopped in her tracks screamed ever so slightly.
“Hanna! What the hell are you doing?!”
“That’s Professor Hanna Moriarty to you dear sister!”
Things had just gone from perfect to absolute hell, Sherlock came out of his body comma to step forward.
“You need to come with me!”
“I have got some unfinished business first”. Exclaimed a thundering voice standing at the church doors.
In walks a tall man in a noticeably expensive suit, conviction in his eyes and quite obviously murder on his mind.
“I am Bruce Wayne of Gotham City! And that woman will answer for her crimes!”
Word Count 992
Tuesday, March 19, 2013
Rose's Roswell Fanfic - FINAL
My fanfic is a prequel for the TV show Roswell (1999). Through it I explore the journey that lead the main characters from when they were adopted in 1989, through to the event that kicks off the first episode of the series in 1999.
Click here to read my fanfic - "Roswell: The Journey"
I hope you enjoy! :)
Click here to read my fanfic - "Roswell: The Journey"
I hope you enjoy! :)
Wednesday, March 13, 2013
CORRECT post titles :)
Hi Guys,
Don't want to reapeat myself on comments on various posts, so just posting this to remind you to please keep to TWO posts (adding/editing/commenting/replying as you go)
1: YOUR NAME fanfic planning/draft
2: YOUR NAME: fanfic (Draft is a bit misleading in the first post title I suggest, you can work on the fanfic in this second post, we won't look at it as a final completed fanfic until the end of week 4. In the meantime this past can be used to store writing as you go, even though it may be edited at a later time)
Thank you!
Makes this Brief easier to assess and follow if you follow these instructions :)
Tuesday, March 12, 2013
lee ryan/ Silent Night
"It has all been arranged" Bella brushed her hand over Renesmee's golden curls.
"Fine...but since I have been such a great student...let me go overseas to the Amazons..with Zafrina..for a vacation." She decided protesting was going to fail so she might as well start negotiating instead. Seems this might be a more successful approach.
"Absolutely not...you know the danger" gasped Bella.
"Just for a week...let Jake come as well I'll be safe with him around...even you know that" Renesmee smirked at the thought she might actually have success with this argument.
She knew her mother couldn't deny that Jacob was the best protection. Shapeshifter, gigantic wolf, totally dedicated to protect her life over his own. Even still, all the danger and precautions taken over the recent years, allowing this request to be fulfilled was unbelievably wrong.
Renesmee concentrated on her mother agreeing to her request over and over in her mind...and to her total amazement her mother agreed.
Looking confused, rather like she was waiting for the real answer from her mother. But no corrections, her positive thinking had worked.
"Really?" Renesmee whispered to herself, now more baffled than satisfied at the outcome.
Depart.
" Final call for Flight 398 departing from gate 7. Please begin boarding now..." announced the attendant.
" Far out Ness, why do we have to go to the Amazon? Couldn't you just go to somewhere like Tahiti or..." Renesmee interrupted.
" C'mon Jake, dont you want to wrestle some Amazon wildlife?" she giggled "Gorillas, Panthers, Alligators...bet they are more aggressive than these tame animals we have here".
He thought for a bit and concluded that it would be fun to take down a gorilla or maybe a hippo or maybe even a huge anaconda.
"Hmmm maybe, actually not a bad mission while I'm there" he smiled "You can take a photo and send it back to your Dad." He laughed and winked at Renesmee because they both knew Edward would not see the humor in their activity.
" Here we go" Excited but still miffed that they weren't going to Tahiti, Jake rolled his eyes and smirked as he handed his pass to the attendant.
Awakenings.
"Unbelievably rich blood, very acceptable Xavier." A deep voice compliments her successful collection of ripe humans from the neighboring village.
"Tell me about your Cullen's." The voice inquires as he hides in the shadows.
"I hear them in the night hours, speaking as thought they love this half breed child possessing our immortal gifts!" She cringed at the thought.
"Wolves as protectors of these Cullen's!" her disapproval increased rapidly "You need to give me your permission." She stated sharply as a violent hiss whipped the end of her words.
"What are your wishes my child?" he asked curiously.
"I want to..." hesitating a moment, Xavier tried to align the correct word to the swirling thoughts so frantically trying to escape.
" I want to...be her".
Arrival.
"Nearly there" Renesmee nudges Jacob.
"Awesome" he states in a half dazed response and then drifts back to sleep.
As Renesmee stares at the midnight sky through her porthole window, she notices the tiny lights beginning to illuminate the ground beneath her. Just as the plane lands on the airstrip a jolt shakes the entire plane.
She closes her eyes for a moment feeling relieved the long flight is over. Suddenly a strange feeling comes over her as if she was being watched. Opening her eyes she looks around and finds nothing out of the ordinary.
And then she hears it just as clear as if the person was sitting next to her, but the only person there was, Jacob. Sleeping and snoring really loudly. She looked at his mouth and waited to see if he was talking in his sleep. No reactions. She heard it again this time louder, as if completely on top of her.
"I'm waiting...for you." Undoubtedly the most terrifying voice she had ever heard.
"I know" Renesmee answered.
" You ok Ness?" Jacob opens one eyelid and looks at her.
" I need to go now:"
"Ness?..Are you..."She cut him off mid sentence.
"We have to go now."
Departing for the jungle Jacob phased into his wolf form and they darted into the darkness, on the path to The Amazons home, Jacob searching for an animal on the way, Renesmee searching for... something else.
"Nothing" Jacob thought to himself and paused for a minute.
In the distance he heard the movement but before he could process the exact location something darted at him, a stabbing pain shot into his brain. He fell to the ground returning to his human form.
"Jacob"
Focusing on the throbbing ache in his head he could make out a voice whispering. Not a stranger but not familiar either...
"Your mine now"
Monday, March 4, 2013
Pranay's Fanfiction - Elementary - Planning/Draft
My idea is to do a fan fiction on Elementary a USA based TV series on a modern take on the cases of Sherlock Holmes, with the detective now living in New York City.
Here is a link to some basic information on Elementary from IMDB
A Link to the official website
Loop-Hole
Sherlock is about to get deported from New York when Joan comes up with a lie to keep Sherlock from leaving, it all turns wild as the lie to have been seeing each other goes crazy and Sherlock solves the greatest mystery try of them all...Love.
The idea of having a false marriage and bringing Sherlock and Joan so close together under the lie is pretty cool. Helped bring about my ideas.
The grinch stole Sherlock's joy
A short fanfic of a scene in the brownstone with Sherlock and Joan.
Gives a great idea to the beginning of my fanfic with a little more detail :)
That's My Line
Christmas at Elementary and the introduction of Gladstone Watson's pet dog that becomes the guinea pig for many of Sherlocke's experiments.
I enjoyed some of the dialog and how Gladstone is introduced into this version of Sherlock Holmes.
Shake it out
The introduction of Moriarty through Adam from a previous episode.
I personally thought that Adam could become Moriarty in the original episode though to young naturally lead to becoming a side kick for Moriarty maybe even an understudy.
Eyes So Bright, He Forgot How to Breathe
Off shoot of a scene in a original episode when Sherlock talks about Irene. Though this gives a little more than normal.
Its nice to see a little more of Irene and it helped me connect the dots in a strange way that she could become Moriarty with the ultimate game.
He stood there glistening in the sun upon his roof top at the brownstone, refreshing UV light hitting every inch of his body as he absorbed the positive benefits of the first mornings light.
"Sherlock!!" Joan was hurtling up the stairs bumping into things as she flung open the door.
"What are you doing?! Why haven’t you got your clothes on?!"
Joan blushed as Sherlock swung around in full view.
"Can’t you surmise the obvious by your self Watson?! I am attempting to put on that glow you were hoping for on our wedding day. My present too you my dear Watson!"
Sherlock exclaimed with his matter of factly face giving way to a slight signer on the corner of his left lip as the joy of putting Joan on edge shone through his bright grey eyes.
Sherlock exclaimed with his matter of factly face giving way to a slight signer on the corner of his left lip as the joy of putting Joan on edge shone through his bright grey eyes.
"For gods sake Sherlock!" Even in her anger she could not hide her feelings nor her joyful disposition.
Moments later everything was on the move and back on track, Sherlock had managed to be bathed, clothed and ready to meet up with Captain Gregson for there journey to the chapel as Joan was waited on hand and foot by her brides maids preparing for the grandest of all occasions.
Sherlock Holmes and Joan Watsons wedding, even the gods them selves felt relief.
Gregson's Grin was certainly something to witness as he opened his door to see Sherlock standing before him.
"Sherlock! You look amazing!" "Okay Gregson, have your fun if you will. Take advantage of my moment of weakness."
Sherlock managed to smile in a way that Captain Gregson had never seen before, true happiness coming through Sherlock Holmes.
"Come now Holmes! It's not often I am in this most fortuitous position, dressed to the nines and looking at Sherlock Holmes in a tux."
Gregson's Grin was certainly something to witness as he opened his door to see Sherlock standing before him.
"Sherlock! You look amazing!" "Okay Gregson, have your fun if you will. Take advantage of my moment of weakness."
Sherlock managed to smile in a way that Captain Gregson had never seen before, true happiness coming through Sherlock Holmes.
"Come now Holmes! It's not often I am in this most fortuitous position, dressed to the nines and looking at Sherlock Holmes in a tux."
Rose's Fanfic Planning/Draft
"Fanfiction is what literature might look like if it
were reinvented from scratch after a nuclear apocalypse by a band of
brilliant pop-culture junkies trapped in a sealed bunker. They don't do
it for money. That's not what it's about. The writers write it and put
it up online just for the satisfaction. They're fans, but they're not
silent, couchbound consumers of media. The culture talks to them, and
they talk back to the culture in its own language."
UPDATE: 20/03/13
I have chosen to base my fanfiction on the TV show Roswell (1999).
I have set it as a prequel, explaining the aliens' journey from when they are found as children in 1989, up until the events that occurr in the first episode ten years later. I mainly explore the relationships between the aliens, and with their adoptive human parents.
UPDATE: 25/03/13
Here is the story arc for my Roswell prequel fanfic:
Max & Isabel arrive at new home after being adopted by Dianne and Phillip Evans. (1989)
Dianne and Phillip's first impressions of and feelings for the children.
History of and circumstances surrounding how children came to be at orphanage.
Max & Isabel's limited memories. Introduction of Michael.
Look into Max & Isabel's new environment, their feelings about their new parents and home. Definite connection between Isabel & Dianne.
Truth about three children. Background/history. Explanation of 1947 Roswell crash.
Glimpse into future (1999) and what lies in store.
Ends where first episode of Roswell begins.
Glen's Fanfiction - Prince of Tennis - Rematch
Characters: Ryoma Echizen, Tezuka Kunimitsu.
The day was bright and clear, with just a hint of a chill to the air, indicating that summer was coming to an end, autumn was right around the corner. Ryoma stepped onto the Tennis Courts, setting his bag down against one of the walls before working through his stretching routine to prepare himself for his regular practise.
"You're late, Echizen! 10 laps around the court!" a familiar, but commanding voice cut through the air, causing him to smirk. He turned to face Tezuka, saying "Ah, but I'm not in the tennis club anymore and neither are you, 'Captain'. I trust you are well?"
"As well as can be expected." Tezuka replied, giving a friendly handshake; he had not been back from Germany for long and wanted to see how well his old teammates had been doing in his absence.
"Good to hear. What brings you out this way anyway?" Ryoma asked, curiously, continuing his warm-up exercises. "Would you like to play a game against me? It has been a long time since we played against each other... I think the last time was when you told me you wanted me to become Seigaku's pillar of support."
"Sounds like fun." Tezuka moved to the far end of the court, spinning his racket against the ground to determine who would start. "Rough or Smooth?"
"Smooth." The racket dropped to the ground, rough-side up; Ryoma had lost the starting toss.
"I win, but I'll receive. You can serve." Tezuka said, moving into his ready position, waiting for Ryoma to serve.
"If you're sure..." Ryoma started dribbling the tennis ball repeatedly against the court, his usual tell-tale sign that he was going to use his signature serve. Surely enough, he hurled the ball up in the air, swinging at it powerfully, sending it flying at Tezuka.
Tezuka dropped down low, ready for the ball to fly up as it always did; Ryoma's "twist serve" had a nasty habit of flying up at the receivers face. He knew just how to counter it though, having come up against many skilled opponents in Germany. He caught the ball and sent it flying back at a slightly surprised Ryoma, who intercepted the ball without missing a beat.
"Didn't expect me to return it so easily, did you? Tezuka asked, keeping his usual straight face, never one to give away his intentions easily.
The exchange between the two of them continued for a while, Ryoma a little perplexed for a moment that Tezuka was returning all his volleys with ease, when it occured to him that Tezuka had not moved from the centre of the court. He was using the 'Tezuka Zone', a skill that manipulated the spin of the ball so that it always returned within hitting distance from him.
"You cheater!" Ryoma called out, giving a laugh, not meaning what he had just said in the slightest, he knew quite well what his old captain was capable of.
Tezuka responded calmly "Perhaps I should start playing more seriously then." Ryoma saw him drop his racket just slightly, knowing what was coming next, but still unable to respond in time, as Tezuka flicked the ball deftly, performing a drop shot that landed near the net on Ryomas side without so much as an extra bounce.
Ryoma gave a groan, moving to scoop up the ball. He gave a mock glare at Tezuka "You never change. I guess there is no reason to fix something that isn't broken though."
The game continued back and forth for a while, both scoring points off each other at an equal pace, showing that Ryomas skill had increased dramatically while Tezuka had been in Germany, though Tezuka himself was still quite the formidable foe.
As Ryoma scored a winning point, levelling their score at 6 games each and taking them to a tiebreaker, they both became aware of the sound of cheering from nearby. Looking off to the sides they saw they had drawn quite the substantial crowd. A bigger surprise still was that a number of their old teammates could be seen standing together, resting against the fence, enjoying the show.
Inui, as always, had his nose stuck in his notebook, making notes of valuable data from both players in case he ever played against either of them; Eiji and Oishi, the 'golden pair' of Seigaku were chatting between themselves, having a friendly argument over who was likely to win the match. Kaido, Kawamura, Momoshiro and Fuji were able to be seen as well, scattered among the crowd, it seemed all the 'regulars' were there.
"Well, we have everyone watching us, so what do you say we really give them a match to remember?" Ryoma said, his hair and eyes turning an emerald green as he tapped into his latent abilities, making use of an ability known as 'Teni'muhou'.
Tezuka nodded, an aura seeming to spring up around him. He gave a yell, driving a powerful serve across the net, almost too fast for the audience to see, but Ryoma returning the ball without even batting an eyelid. The pace of the game steadily increased, with both players making use of their strongest abilities.
The two were so evenly matched however that before long, the score was tied at 40-40, with no end in sight; each player was now fully soaked in sweat.
Oishi, originally the vice-captain of Seigaku, stepped forward, saying "Come on, you two. You've played 'best player' long enough, why not be content that you are just as good as each other and leave it at that?"
Ryoma looked up at the clock, seeing that the two had been playing for several hours at this point, then looked over at Tezuka, before nodding and offering his hand in a handshake, smiling as Tezuka took the hand and shook it firmly, giving a rare smile in return.
"Good game, Echizen. We will have to play again soon."
Current word count - 988. Requires pruning.
The day was bright and clear, with just a hint of a chill to the air, indicating that summer was coming to an end, autumn was right around the corner. Ryoma stepped onto the Tennis Courts, setting his bag down against one of the walls before working through his stretching routine to prepare himself for his regular practise.
"You're late, Echizen! 10 laps around the court!" a familiar, but commanding voice cut through the air, causing him to smirk. He turned to face Tezuka, saying "Ah, but I'm not in the tennis club anymore and neither are you, 'Captain'. I trust you are well?"
"As well as can be expected." Tezuka replied, giving a friendly handshake; he had not been back from Germany for long and wanted to see how well his old teammates had been doing in his absence.
"Good to hear. What brings you out this way anyway?" Ryoma asked, curiously, continuing his warm-up exercises. "Would you like to play a game against me? It has been a long time since we played against each other... I think the last time was when you told me you wanted me to become Seigaku's pillar of support."
"Sounds like fun." Tezuka moved to the far end of the court, spinning his racket against the ground to determine who would start. "Rough or Smooth?"
"Smooth." The racket dropped to the ground, rough-side up; Ryoma had lost the starting toss.
"I win, but I'll receive. You can serve." Tezuka said, moving into his ready position, waiting for Ryoma to serve.
"If you're sure..." Ryoma started dribbling the tennis ball repeatedly against the court, his usual tell-tale sign that he was going to use his signature serve. Surely enough, he hurled the ball up in the air, swinging at it powerfully, sending it flying at Tezuka.
Tezuka dropped down low, ready for the ball to fly up as it always did; Ryoma's "twist serve" had a nasty habit of flying up at the receivers face. He knew just how to counter it though, having come up against many skilled opponents in Germany. He caught the ball and sent it flying back at a slightly surprised Ryoma, who intercepted the ball without missing a beat.
"Didn't expect me to return it so easily, did you? Tezuka asked, keeping his usual straight face, never one to give away his intentions easily.
The exchange between the two of them continued for a while, Ryoma a little perplexed for a moment that Tezuka was returning all his volleys with ease, when it occured to him that Tezuka had not moved from the centre of the court. He was using the 'Tezuka Zone', a skill that manipulated the spin of the ball so that it always returned within hitting distance from him.
"You cheater!" Ryoma called out, giving a laugh, not meaning what he had just said in the slightest, he knew quite well what his old captain was capable of.
Tezuka responded calmly "Perhaps I should start playing more seriously then." Ryoma saw him drop his racket just slightly, knowing what was coming next, but still unable to respond in time, as Tezuka flicked the ball deftly, performing a drop shot that landed near the net on Ryomas side without so much as an extra bounce.
Ryoma gave a groan, moving to scoop up the ball. He gave a mock glare at Tezuka "You never change. I guess there is no reason to fix something that isn't broken though."
The game continued back and forth for a while, both scoring points off each other at an equal pace, showing that Ryomas skill had increased dramatically while Tezuka had been in Germany, though Tezuka himself was still quite the formidable foe.
As Ryoma scored a winning point, levelling their score at 6 games each and taking them to a tiebreaker, they both became aware of the sound of cheering from nearby. Looking off to the sides they saw they had drawn quite the substantial crowd. A bigger surprise still was that a number of their old teammates could be seen standing together, resting against the fence, enjoying the show.
Inui, as always, had his nose stuck in his notebook, making notes of valuable data from both players in case he ever played against either of them; Eiji and Oishi, the 'golden pair' of Seigaku were chatting between themselves, having a friendly argument over who was likely to win the match. Kaido, Kawamura, Momoshiro and Fuji were able to be seen as well, scattered among the crowd, it seemed all the 'regulars' were there.
"Well, we have everyone watching us, so what do you say we really give them a match to remember?" Ryoma said, his hair and eyes turning an emerald green as he tapped into his latent abilities, making use of an ability known as 'Teni'muhou'.
Tezuka nodded, an aura seeming to spring up around him. He gave a yell, driving a powerful serve across the net, almost too fast for the audience to see, but Ryoma returning the ball without even batting an eyelid. The pace of the game steadily increased, with both players making use of their strongest abilities.
The two were so evenly matched however that before long, the score was tied at 40-40, with no end in sight; each player was now fully soaked in sweat.
Oishi, originally the vice-captain of Seigaku, stepped forward, saying "Come on, you two. You've played 'best player' long enough, why not be content that you are just as good as each other and leave it at that?"
Ryoma looked up at the clock, seeing that the two had been playing for several hours at this point, then looked over at Tezuka, before nodding and offering his hand in a handshake, smiling as Tezuka took the hand and shook it firmly, giving a rare smile in return.
"Good game, Echizen. We will have to play again soon."
Current word count - 988. Requires pruning.
Glen's Fanfiction planning/drafts
Potential themes/existing titles for fanfic (anime/manga focussed)
Prince of Tennis
Prince of Tennis Fanfiction.net link
Unfortunately Prince of Tennis is a hard series to get fanfictions for along the lines of what I have been working on, as it has a fanfic base that seems to consist quite heavily of people that write 'slash' or 'yaoi' fanfictions that break the characters personalities. That being said, quality fanfictions DO exist, it just takes a bit of digging.
Sample fanfics found in my wanderings:
"Echizen, our Buchou"
(additional information - Buchou is Japanese for 'captain')
I thought this was quite a good fanfiction as the characters were written mostly within their original design intent, but having been matured enough to show that the fanfiction was written as an extension after the 'canon' storyline. There is some minor spelling and grammatical errors, but besides those, it is a quality fanfiction.
Life after Seigaku
This fanfiction was created as a 'sequel' of sorts to the previous fanfiction, 'Echizen, our Buchou', to try to show what the author envisioned the characters would be doing with their life after they graduated from High School and moved on into the 'real world'. The exposition is well-mixed with the narrative, the characters retain their personality that was intended from the original story and the fanfiction moves at a smooth, steady pace. Again, all in all, I feel this was a good fanfiction, which is why I drew on it as a potential source of inspiration.
Reappearance of the Samurai
Cycling Moments (this was probably the best inspiration for my fanfiction)
Drink of Hell
this was a VERY close second for inspiration for my fanfiction, one of my favorite recurring gags in this series was that one character by the name of Inui has a habit of making bizarre - not to mention foul-tasting - drinks and forcing them to drink them as punishment for challenges.
Character information:
Ryoma Echizen
Kunimitsu Tezuka (in my fanfiction I refer to him as 'Tezuka' since his teammates and even his friends seem to rarely call him "Kunimitsu", keeping with the series)
Issues regarding the fanfiction:
Both the key characters that appear in my fanfiction have a fairly large repetoire of skills that they can make use of, unfortunately due to the relatively short word limit for the fanfiction, I could not go into much detail or describe more than a couple of each players skills.
Prince of Tennis
Prince of Tennis Fanfiction.net link
Unfortunately Prince of Tennis is a hard series to get fanfictions for along the lines of what I have been working on, as it has a fanfic base that seems to consist quite heavily of people that write 'slash' or 'yaoi' fanfictions that break the characters personalities. That being said, quality fanfictions DO exist, it just takes a bit of digging.
Sample fanfics found in my wanderings:
"Echizen, our Buchou"
(additional information - Buchou is Japanese for 'captain')
I thought this was quite a good fanfiction as the characters were written mostly within their original design intent, but having been matured enough to show that the fanfiction was written as an extension after the 'canon' storyline. There is some minor spelling and grammatical errors, but besides those, it is a quality fanfiction.
Life after Seigaku
This fanfiction was created as a 'sequel' of sorts to the previous fanfiction, 'Echizen, our Buchou', to try to show what the author envisioned the characters would be doing with their life after they graduated from High School and moved on into the 'real world'. The exposition is well-mixed with the narrative, the characters retain their personality that was intended from the original story and the fanfiction moves at a smooth, steady pace. Again, all in all, I feel this was a good fanfiction, which is why I drew on it as a potential source of inspiration.
Reappearance of the Samurai
Cycling Moments (this was probably the best inspiration for my fanfiction)
Drink of Hell
this was a VERY close second for inspiration for my fanfiction, one of my favorite recurring gags in this series was that one character by the name of Inui has a habit of making bizarre - not to mention foul-tasting - drinks and forcing them to drink them as punishment for challenges.
Character information:
Ryoma Echizen
Kunimitsu Tezuka (in my fanfiction I refer to him as 'Tezuka' since his teammates and even his friends seem to rarely call him "Kunimitsu", keeping with the series)
Issues regarding the fanfiction:
Both the key characters that appear in my fanfiction have a fairly large repetoire of skills that they can make use of, unfortunately due to the relatively short word limit for the fanfiction, I could not go into much detail or describe more than a couple of each players skills.
Lee Ryan / BREAK THE DAWN /planning
BEST SERIES EVER ...just saying : )
* = Ideas to incorporate
Everything else personal thoughts
*Progression of the Cullen family over the next 6-8 years after the great battle against the Vulturi.
*More persuable will be the relationship development of Jacob and Renesme...
*Idea of a revenge plot against the couple by the Volturi
*Use of the supernatural powers of Alice, Renesme, Edward, Jacob and Bella
*Do the wolves travel to Rome as assasins to protect Renesme O_o
http://www.fanfiction.net/book/Twilight/
this sounds like a good idea for a swap role theme...
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9064527/1/Heart-Of-Stone
i really like this idea ...of maybe Edward being the human and Bella the vamp...but Edward having his mind reading powers...and Bella her vamp powers of blocking...but in his case he is the only one that can get into her head and read her thoughts...???
Have to create Jacob as a 'not creepy guy' waiting for his young imprinted female child to grow up ad become of age...to be his life partner...hmmm still sounds creepy if u ask me
I would rather have Jacob and Renesme ..NOT...become a couple and have children together
But i think half vampire, half shapeshifter babies would be awesome with supernatural powers of changing shape, flying and of course immortality mixed with ....something else.
*The Volturi curse the couple
Everything else will now be posted on the little blogger boxes so you can easily comment on single points
thanku much
: )
ps this is a draft with ideas and babble only...i dont use capitals sometimes and sometimes this goes to txt language and sometimes i dont even use fullstops, if this is a problem please let me know and maybe i will change it...or maybe i wont lolz
thanku :D
time line
jacob gets mind wipe
bella masters her cloaking ability and allows renesmee to travel after her graduation with jacob to protect her
renesmee begins to love jacob as more than her protector
graduation for renesmee
goes overseas
xavier encounters renesmee and jacob
"Celebration preparations are already in motion my darling" Bella whispers with a slight smirk appearing on her face "I remember the fight was impossible, so I am afraid that you will need to, as Aunt Alice once told me, Suck it up"
They both giggled and visualised their own personal experiences with Alice.
"I still dont know why I have to do this...I've only been at Forkes High for one year"
" Yes but to be fair my dear, you have a bit more of an advantage over the other students...you have had excellent teachers during your growth and being able to graduate is an opportunity your father and I dont want you to miss out on"
"Fine...but since I have been such a great student...let me go overseas for a vacation"
"Definatley not...you know the danger"
"Just for a week...let Jacob come as well he can watch over me..."
With all the danger and precautions taken over the recent years, allowing this request to be fulfilled was unbelievably
* = Ideas to incorporate
Everything else personal thoughts
*Progression of the Cullen family over the next 6-8 years after the great battle against the Vulturi.
*More persuable will be the relationship development of Jacob and Renesme...
*Idea of a revenge plot against the couple by the Volturi
*Use of the supernatural powers of Alice, Renesme, Edward, Jacob and Bella
*Do the wolves travel to Rome as assasins to protect Renesme O_o
http://www.fanfiction.net/book/Twilight/
this sounds like a good idea for a swap role theme...
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9064527/1/Heart-Of-Stone
i really like this idea ...of maybe Edward being the human and Bella the vamp...but Edward having his mind reading powers...and Bella her vamp powers of blocking...but in his case he is the only one that can get into her head and read her thoughts...???
Have to create Jacob as a 'not creepy guy' waiting for his young imprinted female child to grow up ad become of age...to be his life partner...hmmm still sounds creepy if u ask me
I would rather have Jacob and Renesme ..NOT...become a couple and have children together
But i think half vampire, half shapeshifter babies would be awesome with supernatural powers of changing shape, flying and of course immortality mixed with ....something else.
*The Volturi curse the couple
Everything else will now be posted on the little blogger boxes so you can easily comment on single points
thanku much
: )
ps this is a draft with ideas and babble only...i dont use capitals sometimes and sometimes this goes to txt language and sometimes i dont even use fullstops, if this is a problem please let me know and maybe i will change it...or maybe i wont lolz
thanku :D
time line
jacob gets mind wipe
bella masters her cloaking ability and allows renesmee to travel after her graduation with jacob to protect her
renesmee begins to love jacob as more than her protector
graduation for renesmee
goes overseas
xavier encounters renesmee and jacob
"Celebration preparations are already in motion my darling" Bella whispers with a slight smirk appearing on her face "I remember the fight was impossible, so I am afraid that you will need to, as Aunt Alice once told me, Suck it up"
They both giggled and visualised their own personal experiences with Alice.
"I still dont know why I have to do this...I've only been at Forkes High for one year"
" Yes but to be fair my dear, you have a bit more of an advantage over the other students...you have had excellent teachers during your growth and being able to graduate is an opportunity your father and I dont want you to miss out on"
"Fine...but since I have been such a great student...let me go overseas for a vacation"
"Definatley not...you know the danger"
"Just for a week...let Jacob come as well he can watch over me..."
With all the danger and precautions taken over the recent years, allowing this request to be fulfilled was unbelievably
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