BEST SERIES EVER ...just saying : )
* = Ideas to incorporate
Everything else personal thoughts
*Progression of the Cullen family over the next 6-8 years after the great battle against the Vulturi.
*More persuable will be the relationship development of Jacob and Renesme...
*Idea of a revenge plot against the couple by the Volturi
*Use of the supernatural powers of Alice, Renesme, Edward, Jacob and Bella
*Do the wolves travel to Rome as assasins to protect Renesme O_o
http://www.fanfiction.net/book/Twilight/
this sounds like a good idea for a swap role theme...
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9064527/1/Heart-Of-Stone
i really like this idea ...of maybe Edward being the human and Bella the vamp...but Edward having his mind reading powers...and Bella her vamp powers of blocking...but in his case he is the only one that can get into her head and read her thoughts...???
Have to create Jacob as a 'not creepy guy' waiting for his young imprinted female child to grow up ad become of age...to be his life partner...hmmm still sounds creepy if u ask me
I would rather have Jacob and Renesme ..NOT...become a couple and have children together
But i think half vampire, half shapeshifter babies would be awesome with supernatural powers of changing shape, flying and of course immortality mixed with ....something else.
*The Volturi curse the couple
Everything else will now be posted on the little blogger boxes so you can easily comment on single points
thanku much
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ps this is a draft with ideas and babble only...i dont use capitals sometimes and sometimes this goes to txt language and sometimes i dont even use fullstops, if this is a problem please let me know and maybe i will change it...or maybe i wont lolz
thanku :D
time line
jacob gets mind wipe
bella masters her cloaking ability and allows renesmee to travel after her graduation with jacob to protect her
renesmee begins to love jacob as more than her protector
graduation for renesmee
goes overseas
xavier encounters renesmee and jacob
"Celebration preparations are already in motion my darling" Bella whispers with a slight smirk appearing on her face "I remember the fight was impossible, so I am afraid that you will need to, as Aunt Alice once told me, Suck it up"
They both giggled and visualised their own personal experiences with Alice.
"I still dont know why I have to do this...I've only been at Forkes High for one year"
" Yes but to be fair my dear, you have a bit more of an advantage over the other students...you have had excellent teachers during your growth and being able to graduate is an opportunity your father and I dont want you to miss out on"
"Fine...but since I have been such a great student...let me go overseas for a vacation"
"Definatley not...you know the danger"
"Just for a week...let Jacob come as well he can watch over me..."
With all the danger and precautions taken over the recent years, allowing this request to be fulfilled was unbelievably
Sounds good!
ReplyDeletehiya: ) do i have to use capital and correct spelling and fullstops ????O_o i use txt language for all my drafts and its just me being lazy until i have the final copy ready. what would u prefer?
Deletethanku much: D
Alice smiles as she views the scene in her mind of Jacob and Renesme both adults now and looking very much in love...
ReplyDeleteEdward also sees the same image from reading Alices thoughts and his expressions are totally opposite, full of confusion and fear
Alice should not be able to see this image because of her senses being blocked everytime Jacob is around ie when he was with Bella , Alice could no longer sense her future.
Same thing with Renesme, Alice was also blocked by her hence the reason why she had to leave right before the attack to get a better 'reception'
How is she now seeing the futures?
Volturi got revenge on the Cullens and took Jacobs shapeshifter power...is he now a full human?
Jacob was attacked and in the process something happened and made his mind get wiped and so he has no recall of his powers and this cause his powers to lay dormant?
He also cant remember he imprinted on Renesme and so he only feels a huge attraction to her and he cant stop it...once he was her gaurdian and only wanting to love her and keep her protected like a brother...but now that boundary has been removed because he cant remember ?
He begins a relationship with her and wants her to be his wife
he doesnt know that he has the wolf gene because his powers are dormant...he doesnt know about vampire either
Why is everyone keeping him in the dark?
why dont they tell him the truth?
Waiting at the bustop
ReplyDeleteEdward and bella try to stop the pair from pursuing ther relationship because the dont want the blood to be mixed and make a half breed...again lolz
But they sneak off and because Edward is hard out on the 'marry first' buzz. They sneak off to get married by a priest and now become husband and wife
re: the scene in Braveheart where he sneaks off to marry his love so the soldiers wont take her for ..beep..on her wedding night.
because of Renesmes gift...which Jacob does not remember... during ...on ther wedding night,while they are....u know... All Renesmes thoughts and experiences she has had since she was born bullet into his brain and he sees for the first time the reality of life.
his old life
his life now
he is disgusted at himself and wild at all the people who lied to him and kept this secret...why the secret?
Vultori threat?
Quiliutte protection?
Curse that will kill the entire wolf pack and Renesme?
Wolf pack lied because the pack needed to be protected and the tribe
cullens lied because they needed to protect Renesme
Why didnt they think about the thought transfer?...they did thats why they didnt want the pair to be together.
why did Renesme not listen? was she even told ? maybe she grew to love jacob over the years as she was growing
missed my bus still waiting...
ReplyDeleteHow does Renesme get pregnant?
she has part human genes and reproductive system of a woman untill she is full grown after 7 years . until that time she can get pregnant but only until the year before she is fully grown bacause she will turn to stone ish and her body will stay frozen at that age. hence no fat belly option.
Wedding night she gets pregnant...super rapid like her mum lolz and then at that point is wen her thoughts are transfered to Jacob because he is now fully joined to her by a growing something inside her : D
Short pregnacy like a wolf/vamp/ or normal like a human?
How does the Volturi do this madness?
Aro aquires a new vamp with super amazing power to wipe memories/ total knowledge/ brainwash and re invent what the victim sees
re: PUSH movie...the asian man on the boat/ the black dude with the power to push thoughts...something like that
why has the Voturi never heard of this vamp till now?
ReplyDeleteNew Vampire Name?
Exotic country:
Powers:
this vampire and his entire clan all have mind control powers but to be really tricky he also an unbelievable power to move objects. a defensive power if the mind control doesnt work. this seems to be his uniqueness, he is the only one that can turn a human and they in turn receive variations on his own power but amplified to whatever core power the have??
name: gained the power of deleting all memories and knowledge and re inventing ther thoughts
this is why any traveller vamp has no information to pass on because they have been mind wiped before leaving the area
nqme: gained the power of cloaking large groups from all outside influences and vampire powers i.e used to hide the clan from ............Volturi trackers and senses. This power is similar to Bellas but extremely powerful.
this is the reason why Aro has no knowledge of this clan
name: mind control to make victims completely obedient.
this is why they can remain undetected. No unexplained deaths or missing people or travellers because the mind control makes the victims created elaborate stories of why they are deciding not to return home and give all details of assets and monies etc over to the clan.
this unknown clan are wealthy, very posh and very picky on the type of blood they feed on.
they only accept blue blood as in royals or extremely wealthy heirs...trustfund babies and occasionally if they are lucky a royal prince or princess..if they are lucky.
are they skilled enough to be infiltrators like the illuminati???
maybe
exotic destinations . homeland of the new vamp
ReplyDeletePERU
http://hiddentreasures.peru.travel/?lang=en
I have decided this is a vampire colony nestled into a remote peaceful part of (Peru) but central to all major cities and tourist destinations
ReplyDeletewhats another exotic destination ???
population: a lot of vamps? little bit of vamps?
The leader of the clan has his 1st born.
Whats the leaders name? not sure yet but the focus is on his son
Leader vamp had a strong Catholic faith before he was bitten, around 1600s?? O_o
**His first victim and became his son was renamed Xavier/Javier
http://babynamesworld.parentsconnect.com/meaning_of_Xavier.html
**Leader vamp was creating a house or family of his own and felt the name was appropriate. also linking it to his faith ...see below
https://www.google.co.nz/search?q=st+francis+xavier&ie=utf-8&oe=utf-8&aq=t&rls=org.mozilla:en-US:official&client=firefox-a&channel=fflb
He goes on to create his house and this is when he notices that he can pass on his powers to the bite victims
Progressing after the great battle, stories start to circulate through the many vampire clans that the Cullens are definatley going to be targets of the Volturi for the public humiliation and disobedience to the 'vampire royalty'
ReplyDeletethe Cullens are also aware of this and especially Bella. Edward and Jacob work together to plan the defences of the clan and Bella begins to perfect her power of shielding.
Years pass and her gift is perfected. She realises she is able to do alot of new super cool things
She has discovered that her power of shielding can also be used as a cloaking mechanism. And it can be kept on 24/7 to cloak herself,Edward and Renesme.
her ability only extends 24/7 her mate and daughter because they are joined by blood. mother and daughter...father and daughter..therefore mother and father through daughter.
however Jacob does not come under her protection because he is not joined by blood.
not blood but u get wea im goin with tht
Deletexavier hears of the stories circulating about the cullens defeat of the volturi. the half breed renesmee
ReplyDeletehttp://twilightsaga.wikia.com/wiki/Renesmee_Cullen
the wolf pack and the freaky connection they have with the vamps
http://twilightsaga.wikia.com/wiki/Black_pack
and he decides he wants to see what all the fuss is about so he travels to forkes,washington
http://twilightsaga.wikia.com/wiki/Forks,_Washington
there he infiltrates the local high school as an exchange student and befriends renesmee and there the stalker mode begins
collecting info on family relationships and wolves all while being cloaked so he doesnt give off his scent to the other vamps and wolves therefore remaining undetected...
cullens unaware of the danger that is coming
oooooo so exiting i feel :D
Xavier falls in love with her and wants her for his wife...but he see the connection that renesmee has with jacob and decides to call in back up
ReplyDeleteand before he leaves to go back to his country at the end of his 3 month exchange programme... he mind wipes jacob. :(
thinking now that xavier is not an exchange student and renesmee does not attend high school?
Deletegot to organise the dates to work in wth her aging etc
xavier returns to peru and tells his father and they decide they will go and offer volturi a way to destroy the cullens...get the vamps that aro wants and have renesmee as xaviers wife
ReplyDeleteactually they dont go to the voturi and instead embark on this mission in secret and seperatley by ther actions they create a door for the volturi to attack?
Deletedisadvantages of bellas power
ReplyDeleteshe can only protect edward if he is in the same area as her / renesmee can be protected anywhere in the world.
not like edward is ever going to let ther little family be apart for long distances???
planning complete now to fit it all in to 800 words.
ReplyDeleteo_O MISSION!
1000 PLEASE ESTHER : )
This sounds cool! I'm not too much of a twilight saga fan but I'm interested to see how this pans out :)
ReplyDeleteofficially have decided that this story is too awesome for a 1000 word blogger fanfic story. i am going to make this into my personal novel mission woop woop.
ReplyDeletewill be now creating a new cheesy fan fic story option.
thanku much
going to keep this and make it into a super duper fanfic 1000 blow your mind master peice buahahaha
ReplyDeleteHi Lee,
ReplyDeleteYou're doing such a great job here - I'm not at all worried about this brief for you - well done!
I can see word limit is an issue for you! Just do your best and don't worry if you go a little over...
You definitely have to make come hard decisions and cull some ideas I think
Also, be aware that you can edit your original post and so don't need to add everythng as a comment if you don;t want to.
Idea: stop collecting ideas and start writing! :)
ReplyDeletei have turned Xavier into a girl
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