My fanfic is a prequel for the TV show Roswell (1999). Through it I explore the journey that lead the main characters from when they were adopted in 1989, through to the event that kicks off the first episode of the series in 1999.
Click here to read my fanfic - "Roswell: The Journey"
I hope you enjoy! :)
Very impressive, I like it. You have been quite descriptive, giving plenty of detail about each of the characters, the surrounding and the interactions between the characters without going too overboard.
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There is some minor formatting errors (mainly paragraphs) but the grammar and spelling is good, I can't see any sentences that have been made unnecessarily long that could have been broken up, the flow is a good pace.
I loved Roswell it was an awesome series. after reading your fanfic and getting to the final line..and then scrolling down and no more. ahhhhh definatley left me wanting to know the fanfic version of what happened next lolz good fanfic well done.
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